[DRAFT] Commend Tzo

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[DRAFT] Commend Tzo

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I'd appreciate feedback on this draft, specifically how to word it better, clearer and make it sound less repetitive.
The Security Council,

Recognizing the sheer amount of effort and time Tzo has spent ensuring the well-being and safety of their immense populace, and of other foreign communities through international aid, allowing peace and harmony to ensue,

Delighted with the Tzoan national policies, including the essential right to public protest, the right to marriage equality, allowing citizens of the same sex to marry, the banning of zoos, known to keep animals in confinement, often bordering on animal abuse, and the right to a maternity leave, a crucial right for the women of the nation, all of which classify the nations' civil rights as superb,

Applauding the immense advancement in technology, such as the bestowal of citizenship for artificial beings, an AI-backed economy, used to eliminate any man-made mistakes, and a national space program, these accomplishments detailing just how advanced the national technology is,

Admiring the utter kindness of the nation’s inhabitants, being the most inclusive in the world, as well as being ranked 2nd in niceness and compassion, having the 3rd most cheerful citizens, and giving a lot of money to less fortunate nations through their extensive foreign aid, 26th globally, certainly classifying the nation as a utopia,

Impressed by the extensive public education, 11th best in the world, having created an inclusive educational community, of different cultures and ideals, and discussing topics ranging from sexuality, political science, and health, which in turn has also put them at the top of the world in terms of intelligence,

Starstruck by the impressive amount of culture in Tzo, said to be the most cultured, offering a wide array of coffee shops and concert halls,

Noting the beautiful environment of the nation, ranked 2nd in the world, likely caused by their ban on cars and airplanes, known emitters of greenhouse gasses, their participation in the international climate treaty, their eco-friendly government, placed 34th internationally, additionally leading to the nation being the second-most popular tourist destination, and their beautiful weather, only beaten by 11 other nations,

Amazed by the large social system, leading to an advanced public transport, placed 14th in the world, the 29th biggest welfare program, specifically to help the poorer citizens of the nation, and the 85th largest public healthcare sector, where universal healthcare for everyone is provided, all of which is financed through the high tax rate, estimated to be the 2nd highest in the world,

Proud of the many, hard-working inhabitants of the nation, with Tzo having the 4th highest employment rate of any place, leading to a high economic output, a high poor income, and a high average income,

Astonished with the stellar health condition of Tzo, being the 7th healthiest nation, made possible by the universal healthcare system, and the country with the 10th highest lifespan, with the average person turning living over a century,

Baffled by the very compliant population, having the 10th lowest crime rates internationally, but also home to the 12th most rebellious youth, implying that abiding the law and expressing yourself rebelliously need not be contradictory,

Pointing out additional and remarkable traits of Tzo and its locals, specifically:
• a large, but incorruptible government, indicated by being seen as the 2nd largest in terms of size and 3rd least corrupt one, refusing almost every bribe,
• a safe and peaceful environment, being the 2nd and 3rd best-ranked nation at safety and pacifism, probably caused through their gun control policy,

Concluding that Tzo is a great example of a intelligent, cultured and inclusive nation, the government having spent years carefully governing every decision and policy to please their population to the best of their ability, and is a great example of what the government of other member states should strive to reach,

Hereby commends Tzo.
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Re: [DRAFT] Commend Tzo

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Updated the draft with various feedback.
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Re: [DRAFT] Commend Tzo

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I have posted this draft onto the forums: https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopi ... 4&t=503275.
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