Commend the Holy Principality of Saint Mark

[Bormiar]

This is essentially a practice round for what we're going to be doing for WA proposals.

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As you can see, people want us to list reasons to vote for and reasons to vote against. We're going to want to get these out before the forum vote (which can't come later to accommodate us), so we're going to start early on each proposal. Most people have already voted on Commend Halo, so this is just inconsequential practice.

Brainstorm reasons to vote for or against here please. We are particularly lacking in reasons to vote for on this one.

[Aggie]

Reasons to vote for:

Halo made some beneficial decisions for TWP as outlined in the proposal, and he is an influential member of the region.

Also, the author is new to the SC and maybe we should give the cute little thing a chance

[Robespierre]

Reasons to vote against:

The proposal itself is written rather poorly, with most of its constructive clauses mimicking a laundry list of titles, positions, and accomplishments.

Additionally, the proposal fails to provide details on how Halo’s contributions in each position were significant, as it spends more time going onto the next accolade then it does elaborating upon how his undertakings in a given capacity are commendable.

[Bormiar]

Great ideas.

Anyone here good at making dispatches look good?

[Tinhampton]

Anyone here good at making dispatches look good?

I think I might be. How good, exactly?

[Robespierre]

Great ideas.

Anyone here good at making dispatches look good?

Depends on what you need. But I’m able to help

[makdon]

The proposal consistently fails to justify itself, and is written in an odd and detracting syntax

[Fauxia]

Feel like it’s better to just take a position in the SC. Oh well.

Reason to vote against: It’s poorly written, and inconsistent and boring treatment of various (whatever Borm’s word for commendable stuff is) does not do Halo justice.

For: Saint Mark has served admirably in a number of regions.